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it's a childs dream
that's sacred to me
it's strange where this world can take you
to the opposite
of what you wanted to achieve

why do angels get hurt
and face all the things they fight
this world can't do without them
the dreamers will only change it
we can't let them be broken

will everything I believed in
turn against me
as the demons hold my heart as prisoner
why have you turned on me
to kill my dream

you can't kill the dreams of a child
and give them to yourself
what will this world come to
damn you
for causing so much pain

damn you for ripping away the memories
damn you for tearing apart tenderness
and the dream of a better life
this is above of what I wanted to learn
something has died inside

damn you for changing my story
and killing all the glory
damn you for bleeding angels
for this dark blurry picture
that should have been heaven

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that was awsome From the Lovley:) Misseeker i like the opening and the last lines it is such a blurry picture to those with out eyes and without ears, for others its crystal and its nice to grasp and share i loved your poem

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Thanks :)

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awsome:jam:

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:) it was a good poem i,ll point out some of the lines in my order that i found so beautiful like a mother of pearl crystal i love reading and reviewing potery and even more when its damn good, You , Cant Kill The Dreams of a child and give theme to yourself its a childs dream that,s Sacred to me its strange where this world can take you why do angels get hurt and face all the things they fight this world can,t do without theme The dreamers will only change it Let Theme Be Broken,

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Thanks to both of you. :)

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your welcome :) the lovley Misseeker