CreedFeed Community

CreedFeed Community (http://www.creedfeed.com/community/index.php)
-   Waxing Poetica (http://www.creedfeed.com/community/forumdisplay.php?f=12)
-   -   To Leave This World With Nothing, But Broken Teeth (http://www.creedfeed.com/community/showthread.php?t=10058)

MrSeeker 11-29-2005 07:26 PM

To Leave This World With Nothing, But Broken Teeth
 
To Leave This World With Nothing, But Broken Teeth
I don't want this to sound cliche
But it does in the worst way
And I can't save my life to save my neck
And I'm wondering how much of you I can neglect

But time has it's way of haunting me
Even though I try hiding my identity
My future is in the past
Where my life could never last

I'll treasure the feeling
Being buried underneath
I never thought I'd be so willing
Choking upon my broken teeth

Time is ticking down
So I keep wearing this frown
Because a blank stare takes up to much effort
And a smile does nothing, but hurt

And I'll treasure the heartache
Being buried 6 feet deep
I never thought I'd forsake
What I fought so hard to keep.

Rocketqueen 11-29-2005 11:40 PM

man i loved the closing lines Awsome Work Well Written


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:19 AM.

Powered by vBulletin Version 3.5.2
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
Copyright © 2004 Steve Caponetto. All Rights Reserved.