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Ann Allusion 06-12-2005 04:16 PM

Sword Play
 
Sword Play

Your sword is showing it’s sting
Like the scorpions tail
Dripping "blood" with every thrust
To this unprotected heart…
Carrying promises of sweetness
In it’s cold steel blade
Promises that nary life nor death
Can fulfill…only love
Past the physical into the realm of spirit
Beyond this earthly plane
Strike and strike again….
Wearing your opponent thin
You know she is yours and will be
To the end…

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All Rights Reserved
Susan D.

creedsister 06-12-2005 10:55 PM

:) That Was one of you,re truly amazing poems :jam: :rockon:

HR2004 06-13-2005 12:35 AM

that was a great visual!Liked it!

Ann Allusion 06-13-2005 03:12 PM

thank you both...glad you liked it... :D ...:rockon:

MissSeeker 06-13-2005 03:43 PM

Wow, I love the poem too, very deep.

creedsister 08-24-2005 11:10 PM

yes indeed it was one Susans Greats :jam: :jam:


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