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Ann Allusion
06-12-2005, 04:16 PM
Sword Play

Your sword is showing it’s sting
Like the scorpions tail
Dripping "blood" with every thrust
To this unprotected heart…
Carrying promises of sweetness
In it’s cold steel blade
Promises that nary life nor death
Can fulfill…only love
Past the physical into the realm of spirit
Beyond this earthly plane
Strike and strike again….
Wearing your opponent thin
You know she is yours and will be
To the end…

©2005
All Rights Reserved
Susan D.

creedsister
06-12-2005, 10:55 PM
:) That Was one of you,re truly amazing poems :jam: :rockon:

HR2004
06-13-2005, 12:35 AM
that was a great visual!Liked it!

Ann Allusion
06-13-2005, 03:12 PM
thank you both...glad you liked it... :D ...:rockon:

MissSeeker
06-13-2005, 03:43 PM
Wow, I love the poem too, very deep.

creedsister
08-24-2005, 11:10 PM
yes indeed it was one Susans Greats :jam: :jam: