Can U guys PLZ rate My WHAT IF..

[geletmote]

hey guys, without bragging plz rate my WHAT IF its me playing guitar... Any other requests??

http://s19.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=110LH04POF6KE3QCLW1MWA9WPB

[eusebioCBR]

link didn't work

[geletmote]

fixed, try it now.

[eusebioCBR]

I'm no expert, but I like it:clap:

[Bridge of Clay]

you play better than me but there's still room to improvement!

[nagpo]

pretty good

[GregS]

Yeah that was pretty sweet man. Im gonna try learn that soon. I nailed " One " the other nite , Need a phaser for 1 part of it tho. Got OLB sorted now too. Learnt it all in chords apart from The main riff. The chorus doesnt sound too great in chords so will work out some powerchords for that part.

[bilal]

aw man.............the link aint working for me..............damn..........why.........why...i pay my taxes and my billss...........then why............damn.............

can anyone mail me the file............ill be indebted.................!!!

[IamFilthy]

sounds good

[HuMaN~ClAy]

sweet! record some more :)

what would i need to go about recording something like this? i'm away at university right now so all i have with me is my guitar, no amp :(... but when i go home in a month or so i'll have my amp, and i also have a capturing device that does audio as well as video... would i just run a cord from my headphone jack of my amp to that device? what kinda cord would i need?

[geletmote]

bro, i just use my computer microphone and my shitty little amp and guitar its a starter pack but for sumreason has a mean sound a really mean MEAN sound u cn tell when i strike those chords.

[bilal]

thanks Geletmote for sendin me the file............i think it was awsome..............you won ur self a fan...........!!!!!

[RoffeDH]

Sounds good man, where did you find the tabs for it?

[RoffeDH]

Oh, and I can play What's this life for intro... It's sweet... :D

[rabidgopher04]

10x better than me, but sure could use some work.

[GregS]

Oh, and I can play What's this life for intro... It's sweet... :D

I can play the whole song ;)

[Finaldecision]

Very well done man!!
I liked your What If!
Maybe I will put some vocals on it soon. If you want to?

[RoffeDH]

Damn you GregS! ;)
I just never had the streangth... I lerned the intro and felt I had over come a great deal... :P And then I layed of... :P Will take it up again...

[GregS]

Lol , i learnt the intro.. then 5 minutes later i thought... oh the hell with it.. im learning the rest of the song.

[Chase]

Not bad bro! :thumbsup:

[Rune]

You're playing it right note wise, but your rhythm in the intro and chorus is off.

If i knew a way to post a recording online for free i'd show you what i mean.

[RoffeDH]

www.yousendit.com Rune... The same as he used to post his...

Gregs, I'm lerning it now ;)

[geletmote]

You're playing it right note wise, but your rhythm in the intro and chorus is off.

If i knew a way to post a recording online for free i'd show you what i mean.

talk to me

[geletmote]

Very well done man!!
I liked your What If!
Maybe I will put some vocals on it soon. If you want to?

yeh bro heres my addy petergero@msn.com - well do it

[GregS]

www.yousendit.com Rune... The same as he used to post his...

Gregs, I'm lerning it now ;)

Sweet man :P
I just learnt all of Simple man by Shinedown last nite. Lovely song , Its great to play too!

[RoffeDH]

I tried that song... Wasn't that hard in the begining... But I wasn't to in to them...

[GregS]

Ah i love Shinedown & Skynyrd :P

[RoffeDH]

Ah, I love Alter Bridge and Pink Floyd :D

[GregS]

Haha , well i love AB aswell ;)

[Rune]

How do i get it online though? It just says how to send it to an email address.

How do you post the link to it and where do you upload it to?

[Rune]

Ok, here are my recordings (i did what if and then fiddled around a bit, they're all pretty sloppy, but i think you'll get the gist of it lol...i'm ESPECIALLY sorry for the solo in ODR haha):


What If:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1X4J3RJD6PMDK2EE8Q4WMYYUXJ

Is This the End?

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2186YGVAL1P770TNN2EOB3R2BK

One Day Remains

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=28OSPYG79GQMP1RRS45BPTODY2

WTLF

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1WUH8NG962EJ32N7ITHSZ8E437


Sorry about the poor quality of the guitar, i was too close to the mic lol.


The rest of these are acoustic songs with me singing. If you think the vocals are iffy at any point, try playing and singing these songs at the same time and see how well you do LOL:


Pity for a Dime:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=39KIS28M6JWV6372F5E6CDFJOY

Broken Wings:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=39HJAIU8A8RTB02LPSZYP0VJ3S

Burn It Down:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1Y65FGI58H4Y02RKSCQGV3F638

Find the Real (can you say strain?):

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3KKCODI82ZM1G3RRX3EDUC4LJK

[Finaldecision]

yeh bro heres my addy petergero@msn.com - well do it

You'll get it soon man!!

[Finaldecision]

Ok, here are my recordings (i did what if and then fiddled around a bit, they're all pretty sloppy, but i think you'll get the gist of it lol...i'm ESPECIALLY sorry for the solo in ODR haha):


What If:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1X4J3RJD6PMDK2EE8Q4WMYYUXJ

Is This the End?

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2186YGVAL1P770TNN2EOB3R2BK

One Day Remains

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=28OSPYG79GQMP1RRS45BPTODY2

WTLF

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1WUH8NG962EJ32N7ITHSZ8E437


Sorry about the poor quality of the guitar, i was too close to the mic lol.


The rest of these are acoustic songs with me singing. If you think the vocals are iffy at any point, try playing and singing these songs at the same time and see how well you do LOL:


Pity for a Dime:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=39KIS28M6JWV6372F5E6CDFJOY

Broken Wings:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=39HJAIU8A8RTB02LPSZYP0VJ3S

Burn It Down:

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1Y65FGI58H4Y02RKSCQGV3F638

Find the Real (can you say strain?):

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3KKCODI82ZM1G3RRX3EDUC4LJK

I didn't listen to everything, but the accousticstuff blew me away. You're a very good guitarist and as well a very good singer. When I heard your recorded Broken Wings I thought this is genius man!! You have an amazing voice, espacially on higher notes.

[geletmote]

LOVE IT LOVE IT, can u do a one last breath

[Rune]

I'll post it a little later.

Do you want just the guitar? Or me singing and playing it at the same time?

[GregS]

Singing & playing , you've got an ace voice man.

[bilal]

yeh rune.....do it man.........waiting for more from ya!!!

but i think GELETEMOTE started this thread and since RUNE has started his own thread in the music section.......may be this thread should be used only for commenting on GELETEMOTE's efforts on what if.....and i think....gEletemotes distortion sounds better........

[Rune]

That's because i recorded on a practice amp at 2 in the morning with the volume all the way down so you could hear me playing the strings louder than the distortion haha.

[HuMaN~ClAy]

oops, there's another thread to comment on Rune's work...

Moved to: Guitar/Vocal Recordings (http://www.creedfeed.com/community/showthread.php?p=312188#post312188)

[geletmote]

Rune I heard your recordings there not bad, why do u play most songs for e.g torn, one last breath one fret back it soudsn nothing like it, anyways our one last breath sounds nothing like each other, well let the people decide which they like

http://s60.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=16GIM5WRY4ATF1BGUD6SD62OL7

[Rune]

because unlike stapp i know where my vocal range is, especially when i'm sick.

The reason they sound nothing alike is because i can't sing OLB or Torn when i'm sick so i downtuned my guitar.

[bilal]

Rune I heard your recordings there not bad, why do u play most songs for e.g torn, one last breath one fret back it soudsn nothing like it, anyways our one last breath sounds nothing like each other, well let the people decide which they like

http://s60.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=16GIM5WRY4ATF1BGUD6SD62OL7



cooll.............. the intro is exactly as tremonti does it....... good effort buddy.......... :tremonti: :jam: :smileyban

[Sentinel69]

I think your version is worse Geletmote.....sorry

[Sentinel69]

Rune, your version of Broken wings is very good!! Bravo!

[geletmote]

cooll.............. the intro is exactly as tremonti does it....... good effort buddy.......... :tremonti: :jam: :smileyban

so ive heard, thanks dude

[geletmote]

I think your version is worse Geletmote.....sorry

you cant go past that intro dude, i dont know

[Sentinel69]

Well ,you asked for opinions.....I guess you asked for honest opinions. Hm?



gr,
Irene (It can't rain all the time)

[Finaldecision]

Hey Gelemote!

I will post What If with vocals today or tomorrow I think. I'll also add bassguitar and drums from a software on it!

[geletmote]

thats cool

[Xterminator27]

hey guys, without bragging plz rate my WHAT IF its me playing guitar... Any other requests??

http://s19.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=110LH04POF6KE3QCLW1MWA9WPB

Constructive crit
- Learn how to host songs.

[geletmote]

Constructive crit
- Learn how to host songs.

wat do u mean?

[Xterminator27]

wat do u mean?

Your file has expired.

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[geletmote]

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There you go mate, sorry I took a while, tell me what U think..

http://download.yousendit.com/D863C9901D90B65F

[metalchris25]

maybe im doin something wrong but i cant get it to play.

[Xterminator27]

You butchered "What if". If tremonti was dead, he would be rolling in his grave.

[geletmote]

You butchered "What if". If tremonti was dead, he would be rolling in his grave.

are u serious as if man, okay show me ur version then ???

[metalchris25]

got it to play finally, but I wish I hadn't. sorry dude

[lookche]

Sorry dude, that was just terrible. It didn't sound right, and i couldn't really follow where it was at. The intro to me sounded like the intro to Are You Ready, but thats probably just my tired mind playing tricks on me.

[Finaldecision]

So, finally the link with bass, drums and vocals added.

http://www.kram-hochladen.com/index.php?p=download&9ca461683ad=ZmlsZXMvMjAwNjUxMC8wLjc1NjQ1NDAwXzExNDcyNzEzODUv

[geletmote]

So, finally the link with bass, drums and vocals added.

http://www.kram-hochladen.com/index.php?p=download&9ca461683ad=ZmlsZXMvMjAwNjUxMC8wLjc1NjQ1NDAwXzExNDcyNzEzODUv

lol thats awesome man, i need to get the guitaring on time a lil more lets do it again dude..

[lookche]

So, finally the link with bass, drums and vocals added.

http://www.kram-hochladen.com/index.php?p=download&9ca461683ad=ZmlsZXMvMjAwNjUxMC8wLjc1NjQ1NDAwXzExNDcyNzEzODUv
It's actually quite good, except you should stop trying to sing screamo. And the drum beat was horribly wrong - when i get my snare fixed i'll record me playing it.

[creed_fdj83]

Would you guys mind posting these again/updating the links? I play guitar too and I'd like to hear your versions.

[metalchris25]

Do you guys know of anyplace that will host your version of a copyrighted song?

[metalchris25]

How do i get it online though? It just says how to send it to an email address.

How do you post the link to it and where do you upload it to?
I would like to know too. Please. thanks.

[bilal]

you can upload your songs on the site www.soundclick.com ... register their as a band....and you can upload your songs with various options like copyright and all, downloading or only listening and i think its quite popular site for this purpose