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07-02-2004, 11:01 PM | #1 |
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My room
I woke up in a dream today
Waken by the sun and its embrace Feeling its soft warmth brush my face Lighting the room so warm but so frozen Coating a still frame of nothing broken Stillness and silence lit in gold Only disturbed by the shuffle of my feet on the floor Quietly making my way to the door A door Iv spotted a little out of place in this room Somehow seeming shaded in gloom Making my way wrapped in the warmth and the stillness Bare feet still waking from rest Guided by heavy eyes still thick with sleep Leading me to the door to see what it hides Left hand alone at my side Watching my right hand slide to the door And quickly sliding back at the shock of the cold Feeling so heavy and almost hypnotizing But somehow finding it so very mesmerizing It was like the feel of something that’s somehow new When you know you don’t want it but somehow you do Unwillingly sliding back to try again A sting from the cold and a slow turn Quickly sliding open and my eyes now burn I’m greeted with dry wind from the other side And what I see compels me so strongly to hide It’s nothing like this room All I see is pain and everything it consumes And its all barely visible through the haze and dust All of witch is stirred by broken trust Some made to mud by depressed heavy rain And it seems to try and quench the fires But it must try in vein For they all burn brightly in the dark Casting shadows of the demons that live in these parts Some screaming for the life they once had Or crying out in screams of how things got so bad And the screams seem to wake me from my shock Pulling myself back through the door again Hands frantic to try and find the lock But I slip to the floor and painfully realize There’s no lock for this door It must be the compromise The one for staying in this room It can open and close and both sides are real Both of them with you and they both make you feel So I do what I can only do I stand back up And ill enjoy my time in this room And when I’m there ill fight through the gloom I’m one thing that it wont consume But a thought that’s not for now Not while I’m hear While I’m here in my room Last edited by Rulesdontapply : 07-03-2004 at 06:49 PM. |
07-02-2004, 11:23 PM | #2 |
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That Was Real!!!!!!!
Im left speachless AND IT SEEMS TO TRY AND QUNICH THE FIRES BUT IT MUST TRY IN VEIGN!!!! Hey everyline rocked It blessed me to read it, KILLER Peace, what a room,
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07-03-2004, 05:38 PM | #3 |
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oh my gosh you have some real talent that was so good i loved every word wow i wish i could write as good as you so a simple bow to you wow great perfect good good like it loved it more that was the best!
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07-03-2004, 06:46 PM | #4 |
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thanks, im so glad u guys liked it
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