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Old 12-13-2004, 01:08 AM   #1
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The Life I Live

[[The Life I Live]]

Crying out for a piece of sanity
To the edge I walk and brace for the fall
No sound, not a soul to be found
Wheres my concience now?

So much to be said
So much to be had
Never seeking guidance
Never hiding tears ive shed
So much to offer
So little to give
I can't erase the pain
This is the life I live

[Chorus]
Falling faster
Jumping into such a beautiful disaster
Centuries collide
Dead out in the open, nothing left to hide
What more can I say
What more can I do
To make it worth the pain
To make my life pull through

Starving for so much more
Bullshit that life feeds me
How can I believe that anyone needs me

Craving so much more
Why do I live, what does life have in store
I'll never know, never care
Why can't I have one more
Moment of peace
A Moment, so rare
Why do I stay in my own world
Why do i Care?!
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Old 12-13-2004, 01:22 AM   #2
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 12-13-2004, 01:31 AM   #3
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Well done, again, tremonti4life04. I can really relate to that one, looking for the meaning in the swirl of craziness that we call life.
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Old 12-13-2004, 01:14 PM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Well done, again, tremonti4life04. I can really relate to that one, looking for the meaning in the swirl of craziness that we call life.
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Old 12-14-2004, 12:47 AM   #5
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well, this one got turned into a song last night, my buddy dave and i wrote a really wicked guitar piece to it, so when i get the MP3 made, ill make sure to post it!
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Awesome. Can't wait to hear it!!
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