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Old 10-30-2004, 11:53 AM   #1
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Breathing

Sitting outside in the middle of the night.
Feeling the wind dance across my face.
The leaves rustling, the trees swaying.
It smells like fall.
Rocking back and forth in my chair.
Just looking out unto the dark sky.
Life sometimes is just great.
It feels like you can finally stop running,
and catch your breath.
You feel like you can rest until the next race,
comes up.
Life cant always be great.
But when it is take it all in,
Take lots of deep breaths.
Right now i can breathe normal.
It feels amazing but im also waiting,
for when life goes bad and its time,
to run again.
But i try to take everything in while it last.
Sometimes it all goes by so fast.
It just flashes by.
Like you just stopped to breathe and then,
the whistle blows its time to go.
But ill think of that when it comes.
Right now im sitting outside in the dawn of mourning.
The light coming to the earth once again.
And i can breath for a while i know.
The stars above my head look over me as i,
Wonder whats next what chapter am i going to begin.
The wind again comes over and calms me.
It tells me rest you thoughts and breathe.
Its time we all breath again.
I'm going to make all mine deep breathes.
I can breathe again.

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Old 11-01-2004, 07:42 PM   #2
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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thanx gald ya liked it i really feel happy and like i can really breathe.
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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