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10-01-2004, 12:20 AM
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How does one quiet a noisy dog? Simple…isolation No longer able to interact You’ll get the “Master’s” status back A loyal friend There for you In good times and bad Never asked for anything… What more could you add That senseless barking So much noise...You’ve got a headache Didn’t want to hear it How much more could you take? How does one quiet a noisy dog? Simple…isolation No longer able to interact You’ll get the “Master’s” status back Enjoy the empty quiet No more will you hear The gallop of those doggy feet… Or the voice you once held dear. ©2004 Susan D. working on different methods of writing...and metaphorical uses...  ~peace |
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10-01-2004, 01:53 AM
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 i loved the opening 
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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that was a good one!
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10-01-2004, 08:22 PM
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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