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Old 02-10-2004, 03:13 AM   #1
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Beauty and The Beast

This might be the most brutal thing I've written. Im sorry if you are offended by it, I dont think you will be,but still.
Beauty and The Beast

"Daddy likes to touch her and tell her little lies
Thats the reason that she begins to cry
She takes the knife and begins to cut
All her life she was told she was a slut
But in reality she was anything but
Its just that daddy was corrupt

Daddy will hurt her today

Beauty and the beast
Now things get unleashed
She takes a sip from the bottle to take her away
Away from the monster that rapes her each day

I see her hiding in a corner crying
Inside she's dieing
No one could ever know just how much she hurts
Because she hides it all behind her smile
She hides all the pain and sorrow
From a past that is so hollow

Tomorrow will numb her

Beauty and the beast
Now everythings unleashed
She takes the pills to take her away
Away from the monster that rapes her each day

The time has come again
So I try to hide within
My blankets,but daddy can still see
And he is ready to hurt me
I cry as he forces me onto the ground
I try to stop him,but he forces me down
I hate the sounds I have to hear
As daddy screams into my ear

This is somthing that should never be
Daddy taking advantage of me."

I hope you like it
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Old 02-10-2004, 03:35 AM   #2
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Seeks that was very shaking and it happens everyday]] but to think when it happens to a kid its very bad and when its done to theme by their own that makes it worser it happen to me twice god that was hard to say here on display but what the heck my hrt has become an open book any way !!! back to the point To think that this happens to babys when there so inconent and pure then later on life it really screws there head up big time and then there fighting demons thats not really theres in the first place then satan makes theme think its their fault and their sin and leaves theme Empty in and worthless!!!I HATE THEME ALL THEIR DEMONS THAT Walk The Earth!!!!! But blessed is the babys And blessed is the adults that fall Victim To theme For God holds theme real close and has A speciale Place for theme In his kingdom]] NICE ONE Seeks~~boy did you get me started sorry my comment was long!!!!!!!
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Old 02-10-2004, 04:09 AM   #3
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Wow, Im sorry to hear that Ta. Your right though,it does mess with people. I hate knowing that that happends everyday but it is the brutal truth of this cold,dark, hurtfull world we live in. i better go before i start getting very angrey.
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Old 02-10-2004, 10:38 PM   #4
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Brilliant! This is probably above all others for the rhythm and the message. You must of put a lot of time in this one because it definately shows. As for the world's devils and angers...yeah...won't even go there.
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Old 02-11-2004, 12:17 AM   #5
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Thank you so much. Yes,this took the most time to write out of anyother one I've written. I guess it paid off
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