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Old 01-15-2005, 11:41 PM   #1
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Help Me Understand

Here I am great fourth rock
From the sun
Will I ever grasp
What occurs just two pebbles away?

Such a beautiful and gracious soul
Still believe the moon follows you
Narcisstic scorpions prey on you
Aren't they beautiful?

Why can't you see
What others plainly can?
Remove those blinkers I plead
Is lonliness worse than such misery?

It pains me to see
You filling the holes with the creepy crawlies
By now you should be queen bee
He won't complete you
No only drag you down
And drown you in your tears
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She never told a lie,
Well, might of told a lie.
But never lived one.
Didn’t have a life.
Didn’t have a life.
But surely saved one.
Alright, now it’s time for us to let you go.

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Old 01-16-2005, 08:03 AM   #2
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killer
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 01-17-2005, 09:54 PM   #3
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thanks!
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She never told a lie,
Well, might of told a lie.
But never lived one.
Didn’t have a life.
Didn’t have a life.
But surely saved one.
Alright, now it’s time for us to let you go.

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Old 01-18-2005, 11:41 AM   #4
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your welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 01-19-2005, 02:37 AM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Melbourne) Narcisstic scorpions prey on you
Aren't they beautiful?
Woh!
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Old 01-19-2005, 04:55 PM   #6
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that was awesome
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 01-22-2005, 03:35 AM   #7
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Sincirr) Woh!

thanks.....appreciate it!
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She never told a lie,
Well, might of told a lie.
But never lived one.
Didn’t have a life.
Didn’t have a life.
But surely saved one.
Alright, now it’s time for us to let you go.

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Old 02-03-2005, 02:16 PM   #8
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nice!
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*And I know*

*You’re a part of me*

*And it’s your song*

*that sets me free*

*I sing it while*

*I feel I can’t hold on*

*I sing tonight*

*cause it comforts me*

"You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same"


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Old 02-03-2005, 07:24 PM   #9
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Anna1011) nice!
thanks anna!
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She never told a lie,
Well, might of told a lie.
But never lived one.
Didn’t have a life.
Didn’t have a life.
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Alright, now it’s time for us to let you go.

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Old 03-01-2005, 04:17 PM   #10
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excellent poem!
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You are never given a wish
without being given the power to make it come true

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Somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile,
and finds in your presence that life is worth while.
So when you are lonely, remember it's true
Somebody somewhere is thinking of you
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Old 03-13-2005, 12:36 AM   #11
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Quote: By now you should be queen bee

Cool line...nice job, hide.
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they make a club and beat their brother down.
How they survive so misguided is a mystery.
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Old 03-13-2005, 07:08 PM   #12
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) Cool line...nice job, hide.

thanks
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She never told a lie,
Well, might of told a lie.
But never lived one.
Didn’t have a life.
Didn’t have a life.
But surely saved one.
Alright, now it’s time for us to let you go.

Tool
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