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06-16-2004, 02:35 AM | #1 |
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The Goodbye Affect
This is a poem...thank you for your comments
The Goodbye Affect ©2004 Up against the moonlight sky Where we both chose to die There is a twinkle in your eye That tells me we will have to say goodbye You are gone away and Im so cold One second gone by without you is agony Pain that breaks apart my heart You are so beautiful to me My one and only Without you Im a pile of blood and flesh A puddle on the floor I want to be there to catch your breath And watch you as you soar With your beautifully painted wings I want to hold you I dont want to know what it feels like to be alone To wake up alone and cold With no one to hold in my arms So cruel is your touch to my skin I crumble apart Like Im breaking within I melt when you kiss me Im taken away when Im cuddled by you I want to feel your heart beat next to mine Because when I do I leave this world behind. ©Stuff This Good Dont Need Titles Publishing Inc. 2004
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06-16-2004, 12:09 PM | #2 |
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Groovy :d
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hahahahaha...i suppose
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super high Groovy That Better
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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