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Old 11-28-2004, 10:41 PM   #1
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A Christmas Thought

A Christmas Thought

We’ve given thanks… it’s no surprise
The holidays are here
A family time with Christmas trees…
A “happy” time of year

Yet there are those who clearly see
A completely different reality
Christmas star’s lost in airborne explosions
Thru moments of brutality

Around the world the excitement
That comes this time of year
Has a different feel…
Somewhat akin to fear

The Holy Lands are not so “holy”
Because of human greed
It’s upon mankind’s weakness
The negative forces feed

Ask yourself, if you had the chance
What kind of gift you’d give
The world, and all her children
That might help them live…

If just one present were given
In the next few weeks…
The gift I’d give to all the world
Would be to live in peace

©2004
Susan D.

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Old 11-28-2004, 11:57 PM   #2
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 11-30-2004, 10:40 PM   #3
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enjoyed every word!
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Old 12-01-2004, 11:14 AM   #4
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Excellent Susan!
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Old 12-01-2004, 01:40 PM   #5
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That was good. I enjoyed it.
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Old 12-01-2004, 07:16 PM   #6
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thank you all for your kind replies...glad you enjoyed it...
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Old 12-03-2004, 02:34 PM   #7
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My sentiments exactly. Well done.
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