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Old 03-10-2004, 07:13 PM   #1
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Thump

They are parasites in the fabric
fraying all that we've worked to weave
We stand idly by and watch
the unraveling of all we believe

Thumping our hearts
Thumping our souls
Thumping our brains
with their rhetoric

They supplant our freedoms
as they spread their words of division
Hiding their hypocrisies, choosing what
suits their needs to blind our vision

Thumping our hearts
Thumping our souls
Thumping our brains
with their rhetoric

The freedoms so hard fought to have
are hanging by a thread of indignation.
Dehumanizing, prophesying, denigrating,
the Constitution of our nation.
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We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."

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Old 03-10-2004, 08:48 PM   #2
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AWESOME, Linda! I loved every word. I wish you would share even more with us and hey, BTW where's that other story you were promising in fan fiction!???
You are a great writer , please don't think otherwise!
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Old 03-10-2004, 09:00 PM   #3
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That kicks a**, Linda. LOVE IT

That opening verse is KILLER!
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Old 03-10-2004, 09:21 PM   #4
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Awwwww you guys are sooo sweet. Thanks. Just feeling
a bit worked up and needed to vent. Glad you liked it.

Oh Kris...hmm had an interesting story idea today. I'm not much of a writer...hate sitting down to actually do the writing. This idea might be
worth exploring, so I may start one sooner than later. We'll see.
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We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."
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Old 03-10-2004, 09:48 PM   #5
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Oh I loved it!!!!!!!

this is what i liked ~~As They Spread Their Words Of Divison Hiding Their Hypocrisisies Choosing What Suits There Needs To Blind Our Vison~~Sounds like Religion~~To Me......Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooo Old Sis Here Gives It A 10 All The...Way...........Killlllllllllllllller!!!!!
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