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Old 06-04-2005, 09:44 AM   #1
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The Wood

The Woods

There are monsters under my bed
surrounding my house
taking over my head
they are eating me alive
they are breaking all that's mine

I am all alone
nothing to fight them with
nothing but my soul
wish I had superpowers
wish I had a sward

Children of the dark
clouding my sky
I run through these woods
but there's no way out
no time to ask them why

Nothing left at all
my life's out of controle
monsters are never fed
but remember I'm the delussional one
so you're not there, it's all in my head
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Old 06-04-2005, 12:27 PM   #2
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a "childs fear" well illustrated...although...one doesn't need to be a child to have monsters under the bed...do they?
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 06-04-2005, 02:06 PM   #3
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It's about struggling with demons and evil people.
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Old 06-04-2005, 03:09 PM   #4
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missseeker you write so well, love your stuff
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*And I know*

*You’re a part of me*

*And it’s your song*

*that sets me free*

*I sing it while*

*I feel I can’t hold on*

*I sing tonight*

*cause it comforts me*

"You laugh at me because i'm different, I laugh at you because you're all the same"


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Old 06-04-2005, 11:08 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Anna1011) missseeker you write so well, love your stuff
I second that!
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 06-05-2005, 06:58 AM   #6
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Thanks for the support you guys.
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Old 06-06-2005, 03:09 AM   #7
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Quote: (Originally Posted by MissSeeker) It's about struggling with demons and evil people.
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh scary stuff its got that steven king feel to it AWSOME
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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