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03-11-2004, 08:36 PM | #1 |
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Inky's Poems!!!!
Unspoken
I hear unspoken promises When I’m enraptured by your voice See so many beautiful things etched In the green of your eyes Feel so many new things when You touch me ever so gently… I’m falling into this pit so deep Feeling you holding me Even though I can’t see you Feel your hands under me Eyes upon me Voice holding me just outside… Just outside your realm of Consciousness and faded reality Of lies and deceit, Marring My dream world so pure… So clear and sharp to my eye… And there you are, Fighting back the lies, Holding in check the deceit, Keeping me safe…. No more faded reality Just dreams untainted Of you and me Decidedly, we’ve had enough, My beloved and I. So we stand upon Astral hill And bid your world goodbye, With silver swords and Magic spells, The portal to your dull excuse for a world Shatters And we are free. * okay i thought it was bad.... * Any comments?
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03-11-2004, 10:33 PM | #2 |
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I liked It!!!!!!!!!!
Fall into this pit So Deep~~Feeling you holding me~Even though i cant see you. Feel Your Hands Under me eyes up on me~~ I thought It was}}} Deep. And Sweet. And I felt A lot Of hidden emotions In This One. Like The person it was written by. Is just dying To tell The Person its written too How He Or She Feels from Deep Inside!!! Which is like all poetry for that matter!!
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03-12-2004, 06:04 PM | #3 |
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Welcome Inky. I like your name and I liked your poem. Very romantic. See you around!
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03-13-2004, 10:27 AM | #4 |
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Very beautiful indeed Ink
I'm impressed!!
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very interesting poem, beautiful also, I loved it
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03-15-2004, 08:09 PM | #6 |
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"I have multiple personalities, my friend."~Scott Stapp
HAHA! i liked that quote cause that means he's like me!!! j/k
anyway thank you all for the support. I really needed it... With You While You Dream by Inky the Loon Lying beside you tonight, I hear your every breath, I can see you smile, still asleep. I wish I could see your dreams, I feel you tighten your hand on mine, I wonder if they are of me? Because i know mine are of you, And kisses on beaches,under moonlight shards, And palm trees, in the night a shadow in dark blue. Lying beside you tonight, nothing can bring me down, I kiss you and you smile, I am a queen, forget the crown. I like that one the best i think
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03-16-2004, 12:20 PM | #7 |
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Another Home Run
That One Was Darn Good To Inky Binky Winky Girl
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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More......
Okay this one's kinda depressing... My best friend Alexandra and I wrote it...
Goddess of Sorrow I am the Goddess of Sorrow Angel of Tears Deity of the Never- Ending Darkness Dressed in midnight black My ashen wings lay broken Across my stab-scarred back I am the Goddess of Sorrow This pain inside It just won’t leave Eating away at my soul I am the Angel of Tears Crying crimson tears outside Weeping my soul away inside Soon I’ll be in total darkness A Hell full of deadly sins I am the Goddess of Sorrow Beaten down Into the Ring of Fire No escape, to be happy and free My one desire But this can never be Thus I am the Angel of Tears No one worships me I stand alone and betrayed Defeated by the cruel men My black heart was slain My back stabbed as I lay dying I am the Goddess of Sorrow Angel of Tears
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03-16-2004, 09:22 PM | #9 |
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A Perfect 10 >>Inky Binky winky U Got It Down!!! Hehe. ANd I Wanna Know U Because Ur So Damn Cool~~Ugly Kid Joe
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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Me? Cool? i'm that girl at school that has long distance boy friends and reads in the corner at dances... and hangs with the goths and is always misunderstood... ME? COOL? That's news... No i'm not trying to be sarcastic..
Singing Out The Sorrow by Inky the Looneyful Singing out the Sorrow At night I hear your sweet voice sing, Taking lift on angel’s wing, Enrapturing me with a solitary note, Across the blood red sky it floats. I answer back with a sad song, Of loneliness and carrying on, Of faded kisses in the summertime, Remembered with verses in rhyme. Every night I imagine hearing your soft voice, Leaving you go was not my choice. Tasting again your sun-bathed lips, Feeling again your hands upon my tan hips. I sing to you of deepest sorrow, Seeping deeper by the morrow, Making me remember you, Your eyes so gentle, our love so true. * dedicated to Mace, I miss you *
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Simply Beautiful
by Astarael Simply beautiful is the shine in your eyes, Made by fire behind them, I pray this flame ne'er dies. Simply beautiful is The way you try not to stare, And the way you run Your tender fingers through your hair. Simply beautiful is the way you kiss my lips, Like a humming bird drinking nectar, In tiny little sips. Simply beautiful is How you make me feel, When you tell me i'm an angel, And that holding me is surreal. * yet another... what can i say? i'm good and inspired*
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03-16-2004, 10:46 PM | #12 |
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Whooooooooooooooooooooooo
That was Good Inky binky Winky!!! Im A Bit Misunderstood Me Self
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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lmao you just love to rhyme with my name don't u? Lmao it's all good though...
* i have adh.... OH LOOK A CHICKEN!!!!* LMAO
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yES i KNOW HE JUST RAN PAST ME AND TOOK A RIGHT INKY BINKY WINKY
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Yay!!!
You understand!!! Her name is Taloola the second... because my best friend manda killed her predicessor... lol
My POEM As you Are I wanted you to know I love you as you are, Imperfectiopns make you perfect, Scars make you who you are So don't change yourself just to suit me, I love you as you are, And i pray you love me too, Every mistake breath and scar
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"I have multiple personalities, my friend."~Scott Stapp "I fell into yesterday Our dreams seemed not far away I want to, I want to, I want to stay I fell into fantasy." Days of the Pheonix By AFI Miseria Cantare (The Beginning) Nothing from nowhere, I'm no one at all Radiate, recognize one silent call As we all form one dark flame... Incinerate Love your hate, your faith lost You are now one of us Also by AFI (afi stands for a fire inside) |
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