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08-24-2009, 12:43 PM | #1 |
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Inside My Soul
Gazing in to the distance
I lose track of who I am Woke up to find this living hell The past is left unspoken All those years haunt me still I'm fading away from your memory The man I could become I'm on broken wings What have I become Rejection is my home Never living for myself I look inside my soul Only to find it torn apart Can't live up to who you want me to be Looking throu the glass I stay true to who I am This is just an illusion I'm filthy & unholy
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08-25-2009, 09:49 AM | #2 |
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Woke Up To Find This Living Hell we all awake to it somedays Loved Those Lines The Entire Piece Was Just An Alternative Punch To A Personal Truth Gazing To And Fro To Ones Imagination of the soul just a beautiful Piece liked this one better than your last one
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08-25-2009, 12:14 PM | #3 |
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thanks at =least i know i have fan here
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08-26-2009, 08:42 AM | #4 |
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your welcome Great Divide i welcome potery the pen unleashes a wonderfull out let not only from potery but to all things and helps us Organaize All Our Parts as unto our laundry whites darks and seprates wows becarefull wit those they sometimes do not always need clorox but clorox 2 unless they have patches of NEON Throw Those Right On In with The Clorox They Come Out Just As Good And Wont Fade As Much After 20 Whashes After 20 Whashes Or Not It Will Still Fade Rather You Use Bleach Or Not A simple theroy really If You Have Never Done Laundry dont even bother A to Read The Following Yo
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08-28-2009, 12:50 AM | #5 |
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I've written more if your interested, just seems that no one else is.
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08-28-2009, 09:07 AM | #6 |
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awwww Great Divide thats not true most of our gang we all shares potery our all checking out Creed World i love reading everybodys stuff sure go right ahead and share you stuff with us
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08-29-2009, 01:01 AM | #7 |
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Very teen angsty. I see it as this; It's like a man looking back on previous years of his life only to find that the way he acted during that time turned him into something he doesn't like nor wants to be. For whatever reason he acted that way(whatever way, it's unlcear) in the first place is up for interpretation. It could be fitting into highschool too changing yourself to be with someone that you dont genuinely go well with, but forced himself to. I also sense a lot of Alter Bridge in it.
Overall, I liked it. Good job. I would like to see more. The more the merrier, this place is usually slow so if only one or two people comment on your poem dont take it to heart. Chances are, those are the only people that come here regularly.
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08-30-2009, 10:54 AM | #8 |
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well for the longest time i couldn't right because Creed and Alter Bridge were influencing my work but I figured whatever if they influence my work that just shows how much respect I have for them and much apart of my life they are.
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