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I wrote this and "Love of the Knife" at the exact same time. so yea, hope you like it
 Chaos "Here in this chaos,I feel as if Im lost Im walking blind and falling behind And with every breath Im getting closer to death Im hoping for my friend to come help me out again My only friend, the very end This world of chaos is breaking me This world of chaos is killing me Chaos is all around and I cant hear a sound All I feel is pain, I wish I could scream your name Im bound and tide to some rope,without life and without hope I cant see anything to set me free Im dead is what Im told, I feel like it because Im so cold This world of chaos is breaking me This world of chaos is killing me This cold world of chaos is dead inside!!!"
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Very good!
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Thanks alot
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From what you did last night that I read, this has enveloped out well.
The end is a little light from the rest, but it's alright. Good job.  It's make an excellent song.
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Thanks alot Kim
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NICE...Love this line:
Im walking blind and falling behind
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