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Old 10-26-2004, 02:28 PM   #1
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Fool On A Hill

Fool On A Hill

Sitting on a hill
Perched above it all
Wonder who, if anyone,
Will catch you when you fall
It’s not a question
Of when or where…
But logistics that we see
Brings the high and mighty
Crashing to their knees

Hidden in this formulae
Lies a little “kink”
Kind of makes you wonder
If those around us ever think
It’s not a question
Of how or when…
Logistics can come true
Just a matter of believing
In yourself and what you do

All the world may think
You the biggest fool
Talk you down…hurt you
Tell you you’re not cool…
It’s not a question
Of when or why
That matters in the end
But knowing you are not alone
Because of those that you call friend

©2004
Susan D.

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Old 10-27-2004, 04:32 PM   #2
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that was beautiful! It rocked!!
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Old 10-28-2004, 01:11 PM   #3
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Thank you...
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Old 11-01-2004, 07:01 PM   #4
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if those around us ever think, i doubt it hehe, i think to a certian point everybody does They just maybe think that nobody thinks like them B/c Of Lack Of Understanding each other, There Is Something About ALL OF US That Is The Same, Awsome Writing I Loved It,
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