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07-01-2004, 07:18 PM | #1 |
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What do you say?
Hush now
don’t you say a word To brake the silence would be so absurd There’s not one voice here to be heard So don’t you ever listen Cover your ears don’t hear a sound Juts conform to me and don’t stand your ground Remember to stay in line where your easily found And careful about where you look around Only see what I let you see And all you should now is that will always be me So only look at what I tell you to That’s just what everyone will do And one more important thing I need to say You should look just like me in every little way And its just not an option to disobey That’s just how its been Every generation time and time again I’m just the standard so don’t blame me I was created by you if you need to feel angry But I make so many of you happy And all take is your right to be free So if you feel the need you can turn away Because you have to give me that freedom But I can give you so much if you stay What do you say? |
07-02-2004, 12:07 AM | #2 |
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Only see what i let u see Nice line !!!!!!!!!!!!YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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i like the passion behind your words so very good i liked it hey when your on again will you look at my newest poem please tell me what ya think
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