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11-18-2005, 10:49 AM | #1 |
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Chains
sometimes I wonder
what I did it all for is it too late to change my choices because I change but everything stays the same I'm not sure if I drunk poison water I was so thristy for a change and then I fall and fall and the excuse is I embrace the dark but then I see you and then I know you fight for the tears of those unheard you chase away their fears the sanctuary of those who are given those who never really had a chance and then I know we need this we need this to bleed out the pain because we deny the stain we deny the poison rain we deny the chains
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11-18-2005, 11:51 AM | #2 |
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very very well written i loved the opening
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