As I Bleed

MrSeeker · 12-29-2003, 06:46 PM

"Deafened by a cry, a sigh, and a bleeding heart
Blinded by a light, a gasp, and a broken heart

Haunted by words that cut away at me
Tourmented by things that you couldnt let be

As I cry,hold me
As I bleed,hold me

Once upon a midnight blue
Death will come and comfort you
Death will soon take me away
And on my way down
I will hear the sound of darkness coming to take me home.

...death come comfort me
Whisper in my ear
What it would be like if I wasnt here

As I cry
As I die
As I bleed, hold me"

Here's somthing I wrote around the same time
I wrote "The Beautiful Tragedy". Just felt like posting it now.
Oh, an update on me for the people wondering,
I am doing much better. Thank you all for your thoughts and prayers

creedsister · 12-29-2003, 06:53 PM

that was moving,,really liked it,,im glad you feel better in stuff

MrSeeker · 12-29-2003, 06:58 PM

Thanks Ta

creedsister · 12-29-2003, 07:07 PM

I like ~`death comfort me whisper in my ear what it would be like if i wasnt here~`your welcome

MrSeeker · 12-29-2003, 07:27 PM

Yea,Im glad you liked it

creedsister · 12-29-2003, 07:30 PM

Word

MrSeeker · 12-29-2003, 10:34 PM

Hahaha

JulieCitySlicker · 12-29-2003, 11:33 PM

That was really good Kevin

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-30-2003, 12:29 AM

It was, I really liked that! Keep it up, I like to read them!

MrSeeker · 12-30-2003, 02:13 AM

Thanks, Im about to put up another thing I just wrote a second ago

Creed_Defaultgirl · 12-30-2003, 03:27 PM

Yeah, I just read it. It was awesome!

MrSeeker · 12-30-2003, 04:57 PM

Thanks,Im glad you liked it

Dogstar · 12-30-2003, 07:02 PM

I'm glad to hear you are doing better, MrSeeker! I'll still keep you in my prayers

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Nice poem, by the way. Love this part:
"Haunted by words that cut away at me
Tourmented by things that you couldnt let be"

12-29-2003, 06:53 PM	#2
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	that was moving,,really liked it,,im glad you feel better in stuff __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

12-29-2003, 07:07 PM	#4
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	I like ~`death comfort me whisper in my ear what it would be like if i wasnt here~`your welcome __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

12-29-2003, 07:30 PM	#6
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Word __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

12-29-2003, 11:33 PM	#8
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	That was really good Kevin __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

12-30-2003, 12:29 AM	#9
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	It was, I really liked that! Keep it up, I like to read them! __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

12-30-2003, 03:27 PM	#11
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	Yeah, I just read it. It was awesome! __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

12-30-2003, 07:02 PM	#13
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	I'm glad to hear you are doing better, MrSeeker! I'll still keep you in my prayers . Nice poem, by the way. Love this part: "Haunted by words that cut away at me Tourmented by things that you couldnt let be" __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

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