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Who's gonna save me
When you leave, baby Who's going to breath Into me, wandering Cause these loving feelings Do not fade, easily The Moon's coverd By clouds and storms at sea I feel like an ocean of motion Why can't I just relax? It's windy I'm a rod With no electricity A fire Without any flames And why can't you watch my back? They tell me life's a rollercoaster With it's ups and downs Oh I think they're lying Cause I've always worn a frown And time is not enough, no Lies aren't sweet enough, no At times I am willing To do my best But who am I kidding? I'll never best the rest So why can't you be here? Pitying the pest The sun won't rise Not this very night But I feel the flames, Oh I feel the flames Rise Who's going to breath Into me, wandering
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And time is not enough, lies aren,t sweet enough, those lines are awsome,loved the entire piece very deep very emotional very bold
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thank you so much
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your welcome
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Great job. I especially liked these lines:
I feel like an ocean of motion Why can't I just relax? That says a lot.
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thanks a ton man.
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that always happens a lot kerri Has Got That Amazon Appeal I Know Shes A really cool chicky nagpo
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