Al I Need To See

creedsister · 07-17-2004, 10:45 PM

You looked in to this heart to weak from bleeding you walk with this soul as the flesh is dying and im nothing left but just an old song nobody sings anymore you know more so who am i the more i loose the more i gain i feel it some where far far far beyond me but it reaches me im my lowest hours before im dead you breath fire and bring me back from a place i dont know but yet i feel ive been there some how before if i could ever find this place i feel as if i would cry no more Im a candle in the wind i go out when the winds come again then you come back again making me new again ive cryed your tears and bleed your blood For anwsers that cant save the world but what about me whats become of me but i know with all thats in me and thats alot but the one thing i will hold on to above it all I Know you love me And They Maybe all i need to see I know you love me and thats all i have left to cling too and that mmaybe all i need to see i know you hold me somehow some way and sometimes it get dark here when you leave me i just know you love me and that maybe all i need to know i know im there carved in your blood stained hands and i know some where when you died a tear of blood fell just for me i dont know much but i know you love me and for now that maybe all i need to see

Dogstar · 07-19-2004, 01:04 AM

Oh, creedsister, such a sad one....
this is a killer line:
...and im nothing left but just an old song nobody sings anymore

Right through the heart. Great job.

creedsister · 07-19-2004, 01:27 AM

thanks Dogstar if i would write about happy stuff i would dye haha

Dogstar · 07-19-2004, 12:24 PM

Hahahaha, I hear ya. I don't write any happy stuff, either

creedsister · 07-19-2004, 01:12 PM

Cool

HR2004 · 07-21-2004, 11:07 AM

liked it keep writing

07-17-2004, 10:45 PM	#1
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Al I Need To See You looked in to this heart to weak from bleeding you walk with this soul as the flesh is dying and im nothing left but just an old song nobody sings anymore you know more so who am i the more i loose the more i gain i feel it some where far far far beyond me but it reaches me im my lowest hours before im dead you breath fire and bring me back from a place i dont know but yet i feel ive been there some how before if i could ever find this place i feel as if i would cry no more Im a candle in the wind i go out when the winds come again then you come back again making me new again ive cryed your tears and bleed your blood For anwsers that cant save the world but what about me whats become of me but i know with all thats in me and thats alot but the one thing i will hold on to above it all I Know you love me And They Maybe all i need to see I know you love me and thats all i have left to cling too and that mmaybe all i need to see i know you hold me somehow some way and sometimes it get dark here when you leave me i just know you love me and that maybe all i need to know i know im there carved in your blood stained hands and i know some where when you died a tear of blood fell just for me i dont know much but i know you love me and for now that maybe all i need to see __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

07-19-2004, 01:04 AM	#2
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Oh, creedsister, such a sad one.... this is a killer line: ...and im nothing left but just an old song nobody sings anymore Right through the heart. Great job. __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

07-19-2004, 01:27 AM	#3
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	thanks Dogstar if i would write about happy stuff i would dye haha __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

07-19-2004, 12:24 PM	#4
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Hahahaha, I hear ya. I don't write any happy stuff, either __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

07-19-2004, 01:12 PM	#5
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Cool __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

07-21-2004, 11:07 AM	#6
HR2004 USER INFO » Status: Faceless Fan Posts: 455 Joined: Jun 2004 Currently: Offline	liked it keep writing

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