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05-10-2005, 11:35 PM | #1 |
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Attila
Attila Over the Stepps This warrior king rode Songs of his battles And bravery are told By the sign of Mars sword He was the one Called the Scourge of God Attila the Hun Empires expand So it will be Before the hoard The weaker will flee Battles were fought Battles were won During the reign Of Attila the Hun Rome was afraid Her emperor feared Attila’s attack Had been engineered Towards ruling the West A dying sun… Would fall by the sword Of Attila the Hun The two forces clashed Neither side a defeat Rome and the Hun’s Agreed to mutual retreat The fight would be spared For another day Unaware that the Fates Would not see it that way For the love of a woman A wedding was planned Ilico’s heart filled with Hate for this man On their wedding bed The murder was done A battle for love… Had brought down the Hun Born of the Stepps… On the Stepps he did die His spirit rides free On horseback he flies Into the West Towards setting sun With a heart of a lion… Attila the Hun. ©2005 Susan D.
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05-11-2005, 01:14 PM | #2 |
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that was awesome!
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thank you, HR, glad you enjoyed reading it...
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This made me think of Tennyson's Charge of the Light Brigade...nicely done, Ann, as always.
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That Rocked Cool great lit story Ann So Compact I loved it
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dogstar and cs, thanks to you both...glad your enjoyed it...
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i did Ann it was awsome
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