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The Arrow
[[The Arrow]]
I've closed the doors And fought the wars My pain, my anger It sings like yours I've built the wall Still standing tall Ive beaten you But still I fall I've been shot down The arrow flew too true I've fallen from the sky But I can't give in to you I lost the greater cause I've slammed into the earth But from my ashes rise The phoenix's flaming birth I came from the ashes And danced in the sun My body and the flames Our spirits are one You lit the torch With a single arrow I fell But now Im brighter than the sun And hotter than the depths of hell In my flesh the arrow head stays I dormant reminder of the ways You shot me down and and broke my wings But now this Bird of fire sings To be a reminder before your eyes That you can't bring me down No matter how true the arrow flies
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12-14-2004, 12:18 AM
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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quite expressive...
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12-14-2004, 11:27 AM
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you bet it was, Strong Writing The Opening, Rocked And The Ending, WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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