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Old 10-25-2004, 10:42 AM   #1
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Shy But I Trust In You Shy I believe In You Coming Out Real Slow Shy Still Im Sure You Know How It Feels I Love You And I Need All Boldness Im Riding In Out Shy But I Trust In You When I Get Near You I Feel Closer To Home And It Makes Me Cry Tears Of Joy Joy But Shy Still I Love You I hear The Echos Of Home Shy Still I,ve Heared The Echos Of Home!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shy Still I Love You Shy As My Echos To You Is Near Know That Im Shy I,ve Heard The Echos Of Home!!!!!! Just For A Second My Heart Gasped And I Heared A Sound Of Comforting That Brought My Soul So Much Rest Shy Still But Still Pushing On I Love You From My Depths I Didnt Know I Had Shy Hearing The Voices From Home Makes Me Feel Comforted Shy Still Its Me I Love You Shy Still As Everything Is Moving Toward You Shy But I Love You Shy In Love Shy With The Weight Of The World Shy Boldness Come For Me Shy Still Somehow i knew i would be But Im Shy I Love You Shy Very Quiet But Louder Than Loud Shy Shy For Once
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 10-25-2004, 09:49 PM   #2
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another great one your writting is awsome!
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Old 10-25-2004, 10:20 PM   #3
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Quote: (Originally Posted by HR2004) another great one your writting is awsome!
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Old 10-26-2004, 01:56 PM   #4
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"shy" could be considered humble, too...i've met "shy" before and found it sweet and endearing...in "shy" there is depth some will never take the time to learn or know...just a few memories...but it digress...

i really enjoyed this writing of yours, CS...nicely expressed...
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Old 11-01-2004, 07:03 PM   #5
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