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Old 11-26-2003, 12:53 AM   #1
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Not the best in the world, wierd style, but yeah, was encouraged to post it. Enjoy-

Black and White-
7-27-03
Dark hate-evil worshippers-blood, violence, death-
Bloody murder-wrong side of the law-
Alone
-So many colors in this world-
Father, Mother, Baby, Daughter, Son, White picket
Fence-
Perfect-
The light-
It dwindles-
-Only Black and White Apparent
No moderated middle-
Only hell and heaven- Sin and Forgiveness,
Hate and Redemption-Satan and God
-Life.
-Black and White never fades-
Light wins good-eternal life with God-
Black survives off of suffering and pain-
Off of dark- off of literal hell of deep hurt-
Sorrow is a friend- not an enemy-
Death happens anyway-
Black and White doesn’t leave-
The borderline of such forces never to be broken-
Just easy to pass through
-Ask for Salvation and love-desire to disobey
leaves
But the borderline is apparent- the spirit and
soul alive-
Black and White -Where to now?
And end or a beginning? Swear words or love words?
Heart sings of joy or cringes with hate and fear-
Mouth speaks rapidly and blundered or slow, too
even, and without just call?
Black and White are the answers-
Black and White.
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Old 11-26-2003, 12:58 AM   #2
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i like your style, it is really cool.
thanks for posting it :-)
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Old 11-26-2003, 01:44 AM   #3
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lol, thanks
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Old 11-26-2003, 02:51 AM   #4
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That's cool, there are many people out there who just don't get it. It might hit them like a brick if they read this!
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Old 11-26-2003, 02:54 AM   #5
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ya know kim,,,the world always see things black and white,,i dont thats mans myth,,there eyes,,i see the world through the eyes of a king,,and is all going down fast,,only the spirt of god do i trust,,,liked your style...there kimmie
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Yea, see Kim they like it!!! I think you have really good writting skills,even more so than me ;-)
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Great scene setter there, and a cool style. Thanks for sharing.
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it's was interesting to read
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