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Old 09-18-2005, 03:39 AM   #1
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Deaf and Dumb

Deaf and Dumb (9/18/05)

Where the fuck were you
When she ripped my heart to shreds?
Where the fuck were you
When I lay sobbing in my bed?

I needed you to hold my hand
I needed to you to help me understand
I needed you to heal my wounds
I needed you to shoot the moon

You fucking let me down
You fucking let me drown
You brushed aside repeated pleas
Too damn busy to bother with me

Where the fuck where you
When I decided it was done?
Where the fuck were you
When I dangled in the sun?

You need someone to hold your hand?
You need someone to help you understand?
You need someone to heal your wounds?
You need someone to shoot the moon?

You fucking let me down
You fucking let me drown
I can’t hear your pathetic pleas
Too damn busy playing dead, you see.
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Old 09-18-2005, 01:25 PM   #2
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very emotional writing, dogstar... when we feel so alone, and the person we need to help us thru is either unaware, or just can't be there...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 09-18-2005, 05:40 PM   #3
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Thanks for reading, Ann
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Old 09-18-2005, 09:27 PM   #4
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So True So True Kick Ass i feel a familiar motavation speach in that One Doggy I liked It
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Old 09-22-2005, 09:39 PM   #5
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Thanks, creedsister!
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Old 09-22-2005, 10:16 PM   #6
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your welcome Doggy I love your stuff and your bold soul driven passion and style i also loved the title
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 09-22-2005, 10:40 PM   #7
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Awww, as always, yer too kind
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