the brave thread...

goddess_bb · 05-03-2003, 12:36 AM

I think alot of you do write poetry or whatever and I was hopeing that everyone would start sharing...I really would like to hear what people have wrote and then share myself...like a little poetry thread but the rule would be don't post here looking for compliments but more as a cleaning...poetry, lyrics, anything..
Come On guys be brave...I'll even go first...

my nerves are shot-
my will is gone-
I am not sure if I can go on-
how hard I have fought-
to be something I am not-
to come to this point of despair-
the realization that life is not fair---

JulieCitySlicker · 05-03-2003, 12:39 AM

I've posted all the poems I've written so far already

I haven't written any more

I might try to start it up again:P

goddess_bb · 05-03-2003, 12:41 AM

You should you write lovely stuff...

JulieCitySlicker · 05-03-2003, 12:43 AM

Thanks:P

goddess_bb · 05-04-2003, 01:49 PM

No one wants to share...

it's okay..instead I will post crap till you guys beg me to stop...

hehehe...

I know who I am
I know what I am
I just don't understand the plan--

Siana · 05-12-2003, 08:32 AM

hhehee,ok ...post all the poems you got!i'd love to read it!

goddess_bb · 05-14-2003, 12:31 AM

Thank you Siana..you're very sweet to say that..It's okay I know I'm a fruitcake...lol...

creedgirl99 · 05-14-2003, 04:39 PM

A broken and wounded heart
Held captive by my sin
A tortured soul torn apart
by the fear that is within.

Okay I came up with that just now...so it's not that great! :P

goddess_bb · 05-14-2003, 11:21 PM

Love it Creedgirl!!! That was really good..it spoke to me..Thank you for posting!!

Here's a quick one from me...

special might not be me-
so he will never see-
------me-------
beautiful complexities-
I will be long after-
the simplicities-
he thinks are key-
disappear so that he-
will finally see-
me--just me--

goddess_bb · 05-16-2003, 05:49 PM

Here's one that I just wrote...

I wish someone understood the darkness of my soul
does anyone else know?
what it feels like to carry this pain
that you just can't explain
I just want to be happy
tired of feeling so crappy..
I get ignored
can't take it anymore
I come out guns blazing
Wouldn't it be amazing,
if suddenly someone said "hey"
You're all right
no need to try with all this might
To be one of us
we're not worth all the fuss...
-----------------------to be cont....

goddess_bb · 05-17-2003, 01:32 PM

another one...

I could of loved you,
I could of been yours,
With just alittle-
need for more,
You didn't want me-
You couldn't see
So we will never be-
What a tragedy!
What a shame!
Who's to blame?
For the opportunities we pass-
that we let go by-
at the end..
will you wonder why?
That your life seemed empty,
Oh why can't you see!!
It's me..It's me!!
that's key-
I could of loved you,
so easily---

creedgirl99 · 05-17-2003, 02:59 PM

I loved all of those so much....you are quite the poet!

I will have to write some more too when I get a chance....

goddess_bb · 05-17-2003, 03:14 PM

Thank you Creedgirl..do post when you can..really like yours too!!

goddess_bb · 05-21-2003, 12:16 AM

Frustration

I feel like shit!
Why don't I just quit,
Rejection is all I get.
They say it makes you stronger
If that's true I will conquer
Too stubborn for my own good
I hang on longer than I should
Why I care??
I know that life is not fair.
No one listens
But then what the hell they missin?
But shit that comes out my mouth
Would it help if I pout?
most likely not
I forgot...
Yea, I'm nothing..

goddess_bb · 05-21-2003, 12:43 PM

Down

Why do I feel like crying?
I feel like my soul is dying,
Things have got me down again,
I think I need a friend..
Just when I think I am okay
I have a day-
Like this one,
where it's hard to function
I try to pick myself up
Let go of all this stuff,
It's got me so far down
Can't you see I'm on the ground
Won't somebody help me
I need help desperatly...

05-03-2003, 12:36 AM	#1
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	the brave thread... I think alot of you do write poetry or whatever and I was hopeing that everyone would start sharing...I really would like to hear what people have wrote and then share myself...like a little poetry thread but the rule would be don't post here looking for compliments but more as a cleaning...poetry, lyrics, anything.. Come On guys be brave...I'll even go first... my nerves are shot- my will is gone- I am not sure if I can go on- how hard I have fought- to be something I am not- to come to this point of despair- the realization that life is not fair--- __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-03-2003, 12:39 AM	#2
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	I've posted all the poems I've written so far already I haven't written any more I might try to start it up again:P __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

05-03-2003, 12:41 AM	#3
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	You should you write lovely stuff... __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-03-2003, 12:43 AM	#4
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	Thanks:P __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

05-04-2003, 01:49 PM	#5
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	No one wants to share... it's okay..instead I will post crap till you guys beg me to stop... hehehe... I know who I am I know what I am I just don't understand the plan-- __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-14-2003, 12:31 AM	#7
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Thank you Siana..you're very sweet to say that..It's okay I know I'm a fruitcake...lol... __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-14-2003, 04:39 PM	#8
creedgirl99 USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,377 Joined: Nov 2002 Currently: Offline	A broken and wounded heart Held captive by my sin A tortured soul torn apart by the fear that is within. Okay I came up with that just now...so it's not that great! :P __________________ The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.

05-14-2003, 11:21 PM	#9
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Love it Creedgirl!!! That was really good..it spoke to me..Thank you for posting!! Here's a quick one from me... special might not be me- so he will never see- ------me------- beautiful complexities- I will be long after- the simplicities- he thinks are key- disappear so that he- will finally see- me--just me-- __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-16-2003, 05:49 PM	#10
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Here's one that I just wrote... I wish someone understood the darkness of my soul does anyone else know? what it feels like to carry this pain that you just can't explain I just want to be happy tired of feeling so crappy.. I get ignored can't take it anymore I come out guns blazing Wouldn't it be amazing, if suddenly someone said "hey" You're all right no need to try with all this might To be one of us we're not worth all the fuss... -----------------------to be cont.... __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-17-2003, 01:32 PM	#11
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	another one... I could of loved you, I could of been yours, With just alittle- need for more, You didn't want me- You couldn't see So we will never be- What a tragedy! What a shame! Who's to blame? For the opportunities we pass- that we let go by- at the end.. will you wonder why? That your life seemed empty, Oh why can't you see!! It's me..It's me!! that's key- I could of loved you, so easily--- __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-17-2003, 02:59 PM	#12
creedgirl99 USER INFO » Status: Freedom Fighter Posts: 2,377 Joined: Nov 2002 Currently: Offline	I loved all of those so much....you are quite the poet! I will have to write some more too when I get a chance.... __________________ The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.

05-17-2003, 03:14 PM	#13
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Thank you Creedgirl..do post when you can..really like yours too!! __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-21-2003, 12:16 AM	#14
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Frustration I feel like shit! Why don't I just quit, Rejection is all I get. They say it makes you stronger If that's true I will conquer Too stubborn for my own good I hang on longer than I should Why I care?? I know that life is not fair. No one listens But then what the hell they missin? But shit that comes out my mouth Would it help if I pout? most likely not I forgot... Yea, I'm nothing.. __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-21-2003, 12:43 PM	#15
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Down Why do I feel like crying? I feel like my soul is dying, Things have got me down again, I think I need a friend.. Just when I think I am okay I have a day- Like this one, where it's hard to function I try to pick myself up Let go of all this stuff, It's got me so far down Can't you see I'm on the ground Won't somebody help me I need help desperatly... __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

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