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03-30-2005, 04:05 PM | #1 |
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Wind Song High on a hill The wind sang a song... Sung to the world About all that was wrong Sung to the world About all that was right The hymn lasted all day And into the nite... This song of life This song of love Fell on deaf ears Below and above... Still the world slept The sleep of the dead Missing the beauty In what the wind said... There were a few Whose hearts were alive That heard every word Upon which they thrived... When the sun rose Bringing promise of morning Those that believed Found it all quite transforming... They heard what was said And knew all along The truth they were seeking Was in the wind's song... ©2005 Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
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i really liked it it was an amazing writing it was written so well
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I agree it was written very well good job!
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thank you both for the comments...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came That voice which calls to me and speaks my name And do I dream again, for now I find The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera Abondon thought and let the dream decend.... Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera You will forever remain the music And I…the song you sing |
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Your Welcome I give It A 10 It Was Awsome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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