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03-03-2006, 06:19 AM | #1 |
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Far Away
don't leave
as the evening falls don't die away please hear my calls can't let you fall once upon a time you were so close and real the air I breathe time won't take away what I feel as you are with her feel me sometimes and when you kiss her feel my vibe we own the time it's a broken heart that I carry in me to see you with her where you will be never again with me the man for whom my heart beats walks distant streets I reach out my hands to feel you trough the atmosphere to feel you there though destiny won't smile at me I keep you here so close and real please remember me once I'm not here
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03-03-2006, 11:01 AM | #2 |
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Re: Far Away
The Lovley Misseeker that wrting was as in one piece as was in many and it was beautiful it puts me in mind of a oldish gospel Tune That Went Something Like This, HE WILL PICK UP THE PIECES TIME AND TIME AGAIN THERE IS NOT A BROKEN VESSEL GOD CAN,T HEAL Dont Leave As The Evening Calls dont Die Away Please Hear My Calls Can,t Let You Fall The Entire Poem Was Very Very Well Written
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03-03-2006, 11:21 AM | #3 |
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Re: Far Away
Really well-written, melancholy lyrics! But you still got lines of hope in the end, which I think is good!
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