my little poet friend well i for one like the opening because to me it gave great direction the opening did on where the entire piece was heading thats my opion though yes and about being our worst critic 9 times out of 10 we usally crtisize our kick own our ass enough times we really dont need nobody else to do it for us
sometimes im like never mind i,ll do it myself ...i wanna post my new stuff if i ever have time ...