[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by adparaiki)

Thanks I really appreciate your comments, to be honest when we recorded that I couldn't hear myself at all lol and yeah I know I could have done better and went of key a few times. I know what you mean about the bridge thanks. It doesn't really change from the rest of the song does it and i think you're right i need to work on that.

I thnk aswell to shorten the beginning the verse could just star instead of being played through once with no voice. But yh i thought aswell the whole song goes on a bit too long.

Thanks bro you're feedback has been really useful to me.

im a thinking im a thinking, let me sleep on it....hard to say what instruments on the inside of the song locked inside, is trying to make, or wanting you to hear....i feel endless possabilties, for now sing as is.....take care of our throats and voices...and dont abuse theme, by trying to throw, theme out of range, because they so beautiful....