[adparaiki]

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo)

Your voice is kinda hard to hear and sometimes off key. The beginning of the song is to long and the song doesn't feel like it goes anywhere. The bridge doesn't feel like a bridge, if you know what I mean.

Those are my main criticisms. I think the song has a lot of potential actually. The song reminds me of Collective Soul. Keep us updated bro.

Thanks I really appreciate your comments, to be honest when we recorded that I couldn't hear myself at all lol and yeah I know I could have done better and went of key a few times. I know what you mean about the bridge thanks. It doesn't really change from the rest of the song does it and i think you're right i need to work on that.

I thnk aswell to shorten the beginning the verse could just star instead of being played through once with no voice. But yh i thought aswell the whole song goes on a bit too long.

Thanks bro you're feedback has been really useful to me.