Thread: You Selfish
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Old 04-18-2004, 07:12 AM   #6
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Aimee) Hide,
That was so rocking man! I LOVED it. Very touching. This is my favorite part:
You claim to be a daughter
depart for I do not know you
a false prophet you are
Nadab's fire you shall consume your profane sacrifice
take that child away from your cursed breasts
you selfish....

Puts tears in my eyes with the image you paint in the words. Do you have any music for you? Seriously though... if not you should, or someone should. Great job!

thanks heaps for the encouragement, no i am not in a band. as for my voice its good for the shower but its not for public consumption! i can play the drums a bit but that is about all. i don't think music companies employ people to write lyrics, because frankly the pop world doesn't want or care about lyrics of any substance. i did enter one of my poem's in a local writing compeition and i'll see how i go. i have no idea how many people entered or what the compeition is like. what's the last thing a drummer saids to his bandmates? hey guys can we try one of my songs!
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