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Sam16 05-19-2003 11:44 PM

Poem I wrote
 
Another darker one :crying:

Seeking Peace

A clouded sky begins to darkens my way
Lightning strikes above no longer can I stay
I Listen for directions but thunder fills my ears
I though I felt rain but it was only my tears
Running from this place but were can I go
The comfort I had was all just a show
But I see a brake in the blinding storm
I don’t know if I can make it for my soul is torn
It’s hail beat my heart far to long
My spirit fading but still I prolong
I hope I find some way out
For inside my heart is so full of doubt
Refusing to fail never will I cease
For the brake is still there and in it is peace

JulieCitySlicker 05-20-2003 12:14 PM

That was very good Sam:angel:

goddess_bb 05-20-2003 12:51 PM

Lovely as always..but I don't understand what the "brake" is...

Sam16 05-20-2003 07:17 PM

The brake is something different for everyone. It could be being with your family at the end of a long day, being with someone you care about, God etc.

goddess_bb 05-21-2003 12:29 AM

Okay..wow I have never heard that word used in that context before..thanks..always lookin for new words...
So is it getting less scary yet posting??

Sam16 05-21-2003 02:30 PM

yeah, I really care less and less what others think because this is just a way for me to express myself.

goddess_bb 05-21-2003 04:19 PM

Good for you, Sam..that is really a big step..


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