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mushroomy2k

12-09-2003 01:58 PM

Deep Inside

I never thought i would ever know or feel the presence
of the power of saddness Deep inside which never subsides.
I feel like a mole in a hole underground,slow,in darkness
the cold inside never subsides.
lost is the power of happiness and spirit.
in the morning when i wake my spirit screams why didnt
you dissapate love what you have before its to late.

creedsister

12-09-2003 05:54 PM

yeap i can relate to all that stuff,,cant seem to get away from it,,but i dont think its ever to late,,by the way killer poem,,,

Sheila63

12-10-2003 11:58 AM

Great poem, mushroomy2k. :D I can definitely relate.

MrSeeker

12-10-2003 09:10 PM

Yea, its good :D

PaulMcCoygirl

12-10-2003 09:40 PM

Wow, I can definitely relate to that! Great poem by the way! :)

mushroomy2k

12-11-2003 08:14 AM

thanks everyone i tried not as good as all of yours but gave it a shot.

creedsister

12-11-2003 09:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mushroomy2k

thanks everyone i tried not as good as all of yours but gave it a shot.

well i liked reading theme just like anybody else,s,,and they kinda touched me too,,keep em coming,,peace

SCOTTSMYMAN

12-11-2003 10:22 AM

It was as good! Great poem. Keep posting!

Creed_Defaultgirl

12-14-2003 12:16 AM

It was great! What are you talking about you just gave it a shot? I liked it!

Aimee

12-14-2003 11:14 PM

Me too! Especially this part...
in the morning when i wake my spirit screams

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