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Dogstar 08-06-2004 03:31 AM

Beauty Queen
 
Constant quest for perfection
Buried in a funhouse reflection
Tentacles of endless temptation
Squeeze her mind into dutiful deception

Pangs of hunger feed the smile she wears
As she withers away and slowly disappears
Protruding beauty validates the stares
A stubborn will abates her fears

She won’t let the whispers alter her stand
It’s not their place to force her hand
They don’t understand the high she craves
She prays to the god who keeps her a slave

Drink of the cup
Eat from the trough
Of the facades that hide
The dying inside

Ann Allusion 08-06-2004 07:48 AM

Quote:

Drink of the cup
Eat from the trough
Of the facades that hide
The dying inside

:( ....but you covered it, Dogstar...nicely expressed.

Dogstar 08-06-2004 11:54 AM

Thanks much, Ann :)

creedsister 08-06-2004 01:46 PM

Wow Dog Thats Some Awsome Writing :jam:

Sheila63 08-07-2004 04:32 PM

WOW, Kerri!! Powerful poem!! :clap: :clap:

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Dogstar 08-07-2004 04:45 PM

Thanks tons :)

SCOTTSMYMAN 08-11-2004 10:14 AM

Awesome Kerri!! :clap: As always!!

Dogstar 08-14-2004 12:30 AM

Thanks, Kris, and it's nice to see you!

MrSeeker 08-14-2004 11:40 PM

Very well done Kerri! Keep up the good work :)

Dogstar 08-15-2004 07:14 PM

Thank you, MrSeeker!


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