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the heart or mind?
can't you think with your heart and not your brain?
but isn't that just the problem before our eyes? broken homes and teary eyes and gravity takes hold when the eros fades where is the agape is love a feeling or a state of mind? how much of a role does luck play in deciding what type of car you will drive? never happy with the lack of curves on our old volvos when we should look away is contement a level or a state of mind? sent my mother off to that nice old place the other day she's in good hands with other men and women her age with the other children she don't remember me anyway this car is so much better oh she's lost her mind before you tell me stop building that white picket fence look around you the builing is falling down the foundations rotted down so long ago driven by passion and the impulse buy shouldn't we just stop and use our minds? |
I liked this one...your stuff always comes from so many directions, of life..., yes i believe if we would you just plan common since, that the Good Lord gives us, the world we better a better place, which we now have lived in it, long enough, that nobody uses common since, And hearts tell us its wrong, if your really would just think with your heart...you would see the ugly truth of this world, and knowing me i could just go on and on ..but i will shutup
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Well done, hide. I really like the last two verses a lot. They say soooo much about where we are as people.
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thanks for the kind words, i probably should have spent a bit more time on it!
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Yeah, sometimes it's better not to edit.
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