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Still here with me - with live recording
Hi my friends. I would really appreciate any feedback on the lyrics, song and recording performance.
I recorded the song in one take on a tape machine lol and then just plugged it into my pc and then put it to mp3 and uploaded it onto the site. The song is here - http://www.totallyunsigned.co.uk/textbooktakedown and is called Still here with me. It is just me singing and playing guitar The lyrics are Verse 1 & 2 - haven't done lyrics for verse 2 yet sorry I had braced myself for you to leave But you came through for me And I need you more than you know Has life taken its toll Pre-Chorus On me - I know now you'd never leave You and me - I know now we'll never be too far apart Chorus Can believe your still here with me I thought I would just loose my mind without you by myside Other Section Without you here i'd fall apart inside that's why i'm still holding on to you Cheers Adam |
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those are pretty good, i,ll wait on the rest of the lyrics, now why should i give feed back on ya,alls stuff, in all, when i dont get any feed back on my stuff, not that im looking for it i enjoy sharing it wit ya,s part of my salvation, and please no im kidding in a round about way, ;) PEACE BE WITH YOU, Soul Spirt Love Peace, Harmony, ...........:rockon: :peacelove
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Aw i'm sorry if i mist posts by you. I know I gave feedback on a couple of your posts and I know you always give feedback on my posts so thanks I really appreciate it. :) What did you think of the actual recording out of interest? |
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