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Take It
By: Amy Aumick 2004
Take this tear Trap it as it falls from me Find in it your reflection Of all we could have been. Take my hand Small fold it in your own Find in it your comfort Of all we once called home. Take this time Wrap it up in plastic Find in it our suffocation And all that never lasted. Take these words Keep them in your pocket Find in them some solace Bitterness will mock them. Take it all from me It’s all I have to give Find in it all we’ve known Pour it through a sieve. Take what will never be again Before it’s all gone for good. Did you like it? Now it’s gone. Find it again? You never could. |
Oh man Amy, that is so moving. I've got tears in my eyes, it was really touching. Excellent job.
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WOW, Aimee...man, that takes me somewhere for sure...I especially love these two verses:
Take this time Wrap it up in plastic Find in it our suffocation And all that never lasted. Take these words Keep them in your pocket Find in them some solace Bitterness will mock them. |
Good one Aim I felt A lot of Emotions in that one,
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Aimee , that was awesome!! This is my favorite verse:
~Take what will never be again Before it’s all gone for good. Did you like it? Now it’s gone. Find it again? You never could.~ Very emotional poem. :crying: |
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