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Sam16 06-02-2003 11:05 PM

Poem :)
 
Dark Sun

A flaw seeming so small was not worth my time
but now strength to stop it i just cannot find
it grew inside me fueld by my lust
to weak to fight this in what can i trust
a question unanswerd so my mind seeks a face
hoping for a road to take me from this place
for my sun is so dark and my road leads to nowhere
how could a flaw so small cause this much fear
but a lesson iv learned thers no flaw to small
and that what dwells in this world will someday all fall
so under a dark sun and walking my road
just walking toward the end draging this load

JulieCitySlicker 06-02-2003 11:09 PM

Great poem Sam:P I can relate to it a lot:)

goddess_bb 06-02-2003 11:24 PM

incrediable Sam...deeply profound...


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