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Torn Signs 11-26-2003 12:53 AM

Not the best in the world, wierd style, but yeah, was encouraged to post it. Enjoy- :wtf:

Black and White-
7-27-03
Dark hate-evil worshippers-blood, violence, death-
Bloody murder-wrong side of the law-
Alone
-So many colors in this world-
Father, Mother, Baby, Daughter, Son, White picket
Fence-
Perfect-
The light-
It dwindles-
-Only Black and White Apparent
No moderated middle-
Only hell and heaven- Sin and Forgiveness,
Hate and Redemption-Satan and God
-Life.
-Black and White never fades-
Light wins good-eternal life with God-
Black survives off of suffering and pain-
Off of dark- off of literal hell of deep hurt-
Sorrow is a friend- not an enemy-
Death happens anyway-
Black and White doesn’t leave-
The borderline of such forces never to be broken-
Just easy to pass through
-Ask for Salvation and love-desire to disobey
leaves
But the borderline is apparent- the spirit and
soul alive-
Black and White -Where to now?
And end or a beginning? Swear words or love words?
Heart sings of joy or cringes with hate and fear-
Mouth speaks rapidly and blundered or slow, too
even, and without just call?
Black and White are the answers-
Black and White.

MrSeeker 11-26-2003 12:58 AM

i like your style, it is really cool.
thanks for posting it :-)

Torn Signs 11-26-2003 01:44 AM

lol, thanks

Creed_Defaultgirl 11-26-2003 02:51 AM

That's cool, there are many people out there who just don't get it. It might hit them like a brick if they read this!

creedsister 11-26-2003 02:54 AM

ya know kim,,,the world always see things black and white,,i dont thats mans myth,,there eyes,,i see the world through the eyes of a king,,and is all going down fast,,only the spirt of god do i trust,,,liked your style...there kimmie

MrSeeker 11-26-2003 03:08 PM

Yea, see Kim they like it!!! I think you have really good writting skills,even more so than me ;-)

Dogstar 11-26-2003 09:31 PM

Great scene setter there, and a cool style. Thanks for sharing.

Siana 11-30-2003 09:04 AM

it's was interesting to read:)

Torn Signs 12-02-2003 12:00 AM

thanks ;)

creedsister 12-02-2003 12:42 AM

word;;

creedsister 12-02-2003 12:43 AM

word;;


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